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Wednesday, August 10, 2016

Paul Bunyan & Me in Yosemite FINISHED!!!

I am excited to say that I have sent the manuscript and final draft of the cover for Paul Bunyan & Me in Yosemite The Adventures of a Jr. Ranger (Book #1) to over fifteen different literary agents, looking for possible representation.  I have had a few conversations with different leaders of the National Parks and Conservation Groups, who are very interested in the success of this series.

A few pages at the end of the book, have crossword puzzles, and trivia, made for Jr. travelers, seeking amusement during the long drive that usually comes with almost all National Park visits, and may possibly be the main reason for my starting this series.  The stores did not have a great selection of
helpful souvenirs, to help with road trips.

I am working to review and complete book two in the series, where Lucas and Lucy both arrive with their family, at The Great Smoky Mountains National Park and have a very interesting adventure with Johnny Appleseed.  I am waiting for approval of the title and we may be ready in a little less than a month on this one.

All of the chapters of book three are finished also, as they are sent to Yellowstone, due to publish in October.  We are traveling through seasons, so the Great Smoky Mountains will be during fall and Yellowstone is during winter.  Both parks have amazing programs during those times, that not many people are aware of.

So far by the end of book two, we will have visited two National Parks with the help of four different folk heroes, including the President of the United States. Two of the folk heroes are a secret (in a way).  Not hard to discover, but exciting when they arrive in the story.

Our group does travel by train, eventually.  Also folk heroes from other countries will be appearing, as they seek the help of the Ferns and their small army of folk hero friends, to establish the Jr. Ranger Program and resolve problems with in their own National Parks.

Here is the final draft of the cover of the book.  I will post the entire book, in a few days, as soon as I have a few answers from the copyright office.    









Sunday, August 7, 2016

Elmer and friends!! The Adventures of a Jr Ranger

Okay!! I posted the entire book, less the crossword puzzles and a few drawings and pictures that are in the book, during the chapters.  

You can find it under my blog called The tiny Life of Lucas Fern, organized in chapters. 

It was fun to finally publish one of the hundreds of stories I have told my kids, over the years.  I have also been adding a fun portion of a tradition in Yosemite that many visitors (usually campers) have, as the sun is setting in Yosemite Valley.



Just as people are returning to their campsites and finishing up with dinner, or roasting marsh mellows over the campfire, people begin to shout for Elmer.  It is alarming for a child the first time they hear it, then it becomes exciting.  Just the thought that you can scream at the top of your lungs, the name of a person, nobody has ever met.  

At least according to the three different stories I have heard over the years.  

This first story, an old family member told me during a family reunion.  It was the story of an old man named Elmer, who had a cart full of fresh fruit, fish, and vegetables.  This was told even back before WWII when this person was just a teenager.  

People would shout his name, in order to get his attention.

A different story was that of a young boy, who was lost, during the sixties or so.  His parents began calling his name, and the campers all began calling for him as well.  It did not take long for him to finally return home.  

The third is the story I made up for my own children, since the truth is almost impossible to find.  I tell them the story of Elmer the bear cub, who was separated from his mother.  The bear cub ran across a few children playing in the river, building a small dam out of rocks, creating a little pool of water to swim in.  

They named the bear cub Elmer, and spent all afternoon playing games, and feeding the cute cub.  When the night came, Elmer's mother was still missing.  

That night the children all gathered together and slept out under the stars, with Elmer the bear cub, hoping his mother would return to find him. 

In the morning Elmer was gone! From that day forward, these children returned to Yosemite every year, looking for Elmer, calling his name as the sun went down. 

As you can see, Yosemite can be a magical place, especially for those who can resist the desire to watch television, listen to music, use their electronic devices, and whatever else you can do when you are back in the city, or at home.  

Try and find a spot, all alone, preferably along the river, where nobody can disturb you.  Set out a blanket, to relax and listen to the music and the message Mother Nature has in store for you.  It may take a while to purge the big city out of your mind and system, but for those of you who can hear it.  Her message is magical.



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Saturday, August 6, 2016

Yosemite Camping Part #1 The Adventures of a Jr Ranger

July 14, 2016

Our vacation to Yosemite National Park, finally happened on this date.  We did not go home until July 21.  It was amazing.  The weather was perfect, 80's during the day and in the 50's at night.

My family loves to sleep in tents, so we took two new tents from Costco and some nice air mattresses, several chairs, and everything else that made the trip perfect.

Well, almost.  I forgot my shoes.  I packed the van in sandals, and everything else.  I had not worn my regular shoes in a few days, so they were out of sight and out of mind.  Our hike to the top of Half Dome was obviously cancelled.

I was able to get by without any major issues at all.

My boys and I have a tradition when we camp, that keeps us closer to nature.  We bring a biodegradable soap and shampoo, and only bathe in the river.  The water is freezing the first day, but if you can fight through the chill, you will be able to enjoy an entire week of morning and evening trips to the river.   It feels great while you are outside all day long.

Here is a picture we took while were there.

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Merced River Yosemite Valley




















This is a picture taken from the bridge that is between the pines campgrounds.  We usually stay in Lower Pines when we go.  The camp host is a great guy and does a great job keeping people in line.  If the people do not put food away properly, it is guaranteed that a bear will make a visit to the campground, and you will be hearing some very noisy campers, trying to scare it away.

One year we saw a bear right outside our camp, eating an entire bag of pancake mix.  The sad thing is, is that they become fearless of humans, then aggressive.  Eventually the Rangers are forced to put them down in order to protect the public.  

Another thing that I have added to the Jr Ranger Series, is the trash issue in Yosemite.  There are many issues, but I have decided to mention two.  

The first is the missing clip issue, on the large green dumpsters the campers and visitors, use to dump their trash.  If they don’t put the clip back at night, a bear could climb in and be trapped and killed in the morning, when the garbage truck comes to take the trash.  

The second is the Landfill issue in Yosemite.  The Landfills in, and near Yosemite Valley are filling up faster and faster, causing the trash companies to travel farther and farther to get rid of the trash.  I dedicated a fun portion of this first book, into finding solutions, especially this solution.  

If you ever have a chance to camp, or visit Yosemite, bring a bike, and float down the river.  You will never forget these moments, ever, for the rest of your life.  

I have written this first book, as if you are actually camping with me and my family in Yosemite.  I plan on posting the entire book, here on my blog, as soon as I feel comfortable with the results, possibly tomorrow or Monday.  

Cross your fingers.   




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Jr. Ranger Book Series Planning Phase 7

June 10, 2016

The Grizzly Tree in Yosemite, was going to be the name of the first book in the Jr. Ranger Series, at one point.



This was one of my semi-boring ideas, based before the folk hero idea.  The story begins with the family arriving in Yosemite, at the Mariposa grove (Closed until Summer 2017), and John Fern (the adoptive Father of Lucas Fern) is anxious to test Lucas and his newly acquired control over the L.U.C.A. gene (Last Universal Common Ancestor).  

Originally the story was about Lucas having this unexplainable gift to bring plants back to life, or make them more fruitful, with an additional gift to communicate with them.

 His twin sister Lucy has a similar gift, but with animals.  Just a few weeks ago, an article was published about the L.U.C.A


I was excited, since the initials were very close to both Lucas and Lucy, and gave me an amazing scientific way to introduce their gifts.  

As I was explaining,  the book begins as the family arrives in the Mariposa Grove, home of some of the largest trees on earth.  I chose to use the Grizzly Giant, as the tree that would have an impact on Lucas to begin the series.  

Lucas is able to connect, communicate, and understand this amazing Gigantic tree, that is over two thousand years old.  

Here is a picture of it, and it does not do it any justice.  In person, this is one of the greatest trees to ever stand.  Borrowed from wikipedia.  

Anyways, that is why I was going to call the first book.  The Grizzly Tree in Yosemite.  It literally changes the course of Lucas's life, as he is given an additional gift of growing taller, almost as tall as the great Paul Bunyan.  




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Jr. Ranger Book Series Planning Phase 6

May 25, 2016

With the two legal battles, still consuming my days (non-book related and non-criminal), I was struggling to manage anything productive.  I did manage to work Paul Bunyan into the first Jr. Ranger story in Yosemite.  His hiding place is near an old favorite backpacking place of mine.  

I had a great time remembering, all of those experiences, a few miles beyond the Little Yosemite Valley, sliding down a natural waterslide created by the Merced river, draining from the freezing glaciers above.  Spending many nights, keeping watch over our backpacks and food, so the bears would not get to them.  

A few miles back, made the perfect place for Paul Bunyan to reside, undiscovered.  I can’t wait for you to read this book.  It is 99% finished today, and I will post it sometime tomorrow or Monday, depending on how fast I can finish this breakdown of the writing and creative process.  

Today I was watching my little ten-year-old girl, one of a few Little Miss Payson 2016 girls, who were in the Santaquin Harvest days’ parade.  It was cute.  My fifteen-year-old son was also playing the trumpet for the Payson High School Band.  That was great too.  

I have used all four of my children in the art, and in the personalities, of Lucas and Lucy Fern, so it will be fun to add some of these adventures to future books.


Well, as I said, I was able to place Paul Bunyan in the Yosemite Jr. Ranger book.  I also was able to add his shadow, in sort of a fun "Hidden Mickey" way, on the cover, as well as finally fix the title of the book.  I sent in for the Copyright May 25 as dated above, when these changes took place.  Also the smaller head for Lucas, with blue eyes.  Now Lucy and Lucas have a mixture of all four of my kids, , and they blue eyes are from me.  

See Paul Bunyan?






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The Yosemite Jr. Ranger Song The Adventures of a Jr Ranger

August 6, 2016

This is actually a song I wrote, two days ago.  I needed a song for Lucy to have written during her
stay in Yosemite.  Written as I listened to the song from Disney's animated Paul Bunyan, I had her write this song for the Jr. Ranger's called The Yosemite Jr. Ranger Song, and if you sing it to the Disney tune, it works much better.  I have a cousin who can write something different to match, if ever needed.

        The Yosemite Jr. Ranger Song


Yosemite’s the place where the trees grow tall,  full of Glaciers and 

Waterfalls too!


Where the Jr. Rangers roam,  cleaning mother nature’s home,  

because bears think that s’mores are yummy too!


There’s a fen on the hill,  and a river that’s chill,  for the people to 

swim if they dare.


Cause the water is cold,  only fun for the bold,  and we Jr. Rangers try 

not to stare.

        Chorus:

        Hey all - - - hey all - - - We’re Rangers - - - Jr. Rangers!  

       We have fun, high and low,
                           as we learn how things grow,   

       finding birds up above,
                           and small creatures to love.


       Hey all - - - hey all - - - We’re Rangers - - - Jr. Rangers!   









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Jr. Ranger Book Series Planning Phase 5 The Adventures of a Jr Ranger

April 22, 2016

Our family was becoming excited for our week long camping trip in Yosemite.  We had reservations July 14th for 7 nights in Lower Pines Campground, #12.  It had been over two years since our last family vacation and we were anxious to get away from life for a while. 

The kids were still in school and I just found out that my Copyright on Lucas and Lucy Fern, including the Tiny Life of Lucas Fern was still not ready, so I decided to complete the editing and get something published as soon as I could, to protect the story. 

I had already sent the manuscript to over ten different agents, with only one answer, and small unacceptable offer, and I was worried that one of them might try something illegal. 

I rushed and used Create Space to publish The Tiny Life of Lucas Fern "Born Tiny, Born Blue, Big Ears, and Big Feet Too!!"  It is a beginning story of Lucas, but I plan on making a few changes, now that this Jr. Ranger series, with folk heroes, has changed everything. 

I can keep most of the story, but I was never able to have it properly edited, or criticized. 

Anyways.  Finally, on April 22, I was able to have a great part of the story set up from Lucas and Lucy, arriving in Yosemite, all the way to Smoky Mountain National Park with Johnny Appleseed.  And the progress on the cover was much better as you can see below. 

One of my younger children was smart enough to investigate the origins of Johnny Appleseed, learning that he never really lived anywhere around the Smoky Mountains.  I had to explain that many of these folk heroes, were wonderers, and could have ended up anywhere. 


I have been faithful in keeping them close to where they originally ended up, during the end of their individual stories.   

One of the greatest parts in this Jr Ranger series, will be the Native American connection to each National Park.  

As of April 22, 2016, I was still unsure of the folk hero I was going to use in my first book, beginning in Yosemite.  The reason I chose Yosemite to begin the Jr. Ranger series, is not because it was the first, National Park.  Actually it was NOT the first.  It was the first to ever start a Jr Ranger type program, called the Yosemite Junior Nature School, that children were invited to attend.


This picture I added many more trees, giving a closer feel to Yosemite Valley.  But still the mountain tops here missing trees.

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Here I added the trees to the mountain tops and gave a little more definition to Half Dome, than I wanted.  My kids seemed to like it more, so I just left it.





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Jr. Ranger Book Series Planning Phase 4 The Adventures of a Jr Ranger

April 14, 2016

After a long night I was able to to fix the trees a little, and the famous landmark, known as Half Dome. As you can see when you compare picture #1 with picture #2.  Later I decided that we needed many more trees and a little work on Lucas's head.  Plus the title was still wrong.

Picture #1                                                      Picture #2


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Jr. Ranger Book Series Planning Phase 3

April 13, 2016

I stopped looking for an Agent to represent The Tiny Life of Lucas Fern book #1, due to the fact that almost every company I spoke to, told me that I would not have a chance in today's market, as the unknown author. The nobody!!

Oh well. Life is not easy, running an eBay business, playing Mr. Mom, helping at Church, helping with homework, Legal Battles on two fronts (Non Book related), family member dental issues with no insurance and a very tight budget.  You get the picture. 

At this point, school was almost out and my oldest daughter was celebrating her birthday.  This was when I was sent the color version of the book cover.  It was not very good, and Half Dome was non existent.  I was still not sure if I was going to make the Jr. Ranger Series a Fiction Series, or a true story about my own children as they became Jr. Rangers over the years.

My friend from Serbia emailed me the draft, after I sent him several other revisions.  The colors were perfect, and so were Lucas and Lucy (the two kids in the cover) only the mountains were not the way I needed them.  As you can see below.  

The trees were not even close to the trees in Yosemite Valley, and I was already doubting the title of the book.  I really wanted to keep The Tiny Life of Lucas Fern as a separate Series, showing his journey from a 4 inch baby, to a giant, not even close to Paul Bunyan.

I sent my friend the agreed upon payment, for his services at this point, then started working on fixing the book cover myself, leaving him to finish other project he had waiting.  
Along with setting up the Chapters and creating the outline for the series, traveling all the way to National Parks in Ireland and Japan, I did not sleep until I completed the vision I had in my head, of what I wanted this first book in such an important series,  to look like.







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Jr. Ranger Book Series Planning Phase 2


March 22, 2016 (Phase Two of Jr. Ranger Series Planning)

Things were looking a little better, and the story was beginning to take shape.  I was going to have this book follow the first book I finished earlier.  The Tiny Life of Lucas Fern "Born Tiny, Born Blue, Big Ears, and Big Feet too!!

Then everything changed.  I realized that nobody knew who Lucas and Lucy Fern were.  I had extended family read the book and friends, but they returned telling me that the story was interesting and great, but it may be hard to market.

That is where this idea of including them in this Jr. Ranger Series became more important than ever.

BUT!!! Still boring unless we bring a little BANG!! to the story.  

I sat my four children down to ask their opinions.  They love the stories of Lucas and Lucy Fern, because they all have been told these adventures ever since our first son was born in 1999.  

(Side note: I came up with the names back when I was in High School and I was living with my third or fourth family, feeling like I was the 'Kid with Cooties' nobody could stand.  I thought of myself as the Little Lucifer.  I even met a very well dressed guy, with long red hair, and a long red beard, dressed in a pin striped suit who looked like Lucifer may if he were real.  He thought I was a cool kid as I packed his groceries at Mrs. Gooches Health Foods.  That night I had a dream that his name was Lucas Fern (as in Lucifer) the nice guy before turning bad.  All these years later, Lucas Fern is a twin of Lucy Fern and neither of them are evil, and I never plan on making them such.)

Anyways.  I sat my four children down March 22 to figure out how to come up with a little spice for the National Park Series.  

We looked everywhere on Amazon, Barnes and Noble, and maybe thirty other book sites, and could not find any fiction that would help generate any excitement in kids about our National Parks.  

I told my kids of a story, when I would camp as a kid in Yosemite and I would be afraid of the shadows of the super tall trees.  I always thought that it was a Giant from Jack in the Beanstalk or something, out to get me.  

That is when I remembered imagining a time that I was floating in the river, and I was about thirteen. I was a huge fan of Disney's John Henry, Paul Bunyan, Casey Jones, and Johnny Appleseed cartoon, and the music.  I remember thinking up a crazy idea that all of these guys could have found a perfect hiding place deep in the woods of Yosemite.  

I started thinking of a new title, and a new direction for the Jr Ranger book...  








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Jr. Ranger Book Series Planning Phase 1

March 16, 2016  (Phase One of Jr. Ranger Series Planning)


I decided to pause the two different series of books I have been writing, The Tiny Life of Lucas Fern, and The Saint Nicholas Letters, to create an exciting Jr. Ranger Series dedicated to National Parks.  

After searching for books for children, dedicated to the National Parks, I realized that there were only limited options.  Almost all of the books available were the same books from years ago when my children were babies. 

As a boy, I went to Yosemite National Park, for many years with my foster (ish) family, as a tradition. I loved it!  Later on as I was older and joined the Boy Scouts of America, I went on many different Adventure hikes, backpacking in the back country of Kings Canyon National Park, Sequoia National Park, Death Valley National Park, Yosemite National Park, Mt. Whitney, and more.

I felt like a true mountaineer.  By the time I was nineteen, I had backpacked over three hundred miles of the Sierra Nevada Mountains.  Mostly the John Muir Trails.  

I read all of the books written by John Muir, and began reading about the adventures of many others.  

March 16, 2016 I came up with the title of "Lucy and Me in Yosemite - A Jr. Ranger Adventure"
I also planned out a book for The Smoky Mountains National Park, Yellowstone, The Grand Canyon, and Zions.

Here is the first drawing concept I was sent from a friend I met from Serbia.  I drew the red line correcting the shape I was looking for with the famous landmark we all know and love, Half Dome.

He had never been there, so it was difficult for him to grasp the vision from my Spanish explanation and just a picture I sent him, that I had taken in July of 2014.